Changes to story board

The 1st shot was meant to be the gun exchange from across the road. This was changed so the film would be longer and gives the audience more time to find out what is going on.

The 2nd shot is then a close up of the killer approaching the person with the gun, which then turns into a medium shot of the man.

We decided to take out the shot where the man describes the gun to the killer, and the close up of the unknown man grabbing the killers arm as the killer then has to run away quickly straight after it.

On the second page of the storyboard only one item remains the same, the "inspired by a true story" page. All the rest changed because it was too long and we didn't want to show anyone go into the house. This is because if we cut from the knocking on the door to the gun shots and the three scenes we added, it means we don't know who's been killed which adds many enigmas so the audience would want to watch the rest to find out what has happened. 

The ending is near enough what we planned it to be. The killer runs to a wall, heavy breathing and stops, pulls the hood down and has a close up to her face. Then she smiles to show she has got away with what she has done.

Sarah Fowler